Editing Questions: Narrative
After doing the checklist for your partner, answer the follow in this format:
Name of Reviewed Individual:
Name of Reviewed Individual:
1. What are the strengths of your partner’s essay? Why?
Eli used very vivid word choices that allowed him to be able directly paint a picture in the reader's mind of exactly how the characters were seeing, but also how they are feeling.
2. What areas could use improvements? In other words, what suggestions can you give
your partner that will help his/her paper improve?
Some of the phrasing in Eli's narrative is a bit imcomplete and almost doesn't make sense. I think he should make sure what he is saying is appropriate and makes snese.
3. What is your favorite literary device used in your partner’s essay?
Foreshadowing
4. What is the part of the paper that stands out as the most "catchy" or important?
The first paragraph is very exciting. I like how it draws in the reader and almost scares them, and really makes them want to continue reading the rest of the narrative.
Find out your partner's email or blog and post these answers or send these answer to them as well!
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